Sadly poor, hopeless Cinders cleaned the disgusting floor that his three hairy brothers had dirtied. Prince Cinders’ hairy, smelly brothers chuckled as they left the palace to go to the royal, everlasting disco with their pretty girlfriends.
I love your handwriting
I like how you described Cinders as ‘hopeless’. It made me feel really sorry for him. Great writing Remi, well done.