Why is the earth so angry? By Ria

Why is the earth so angry?

It looks so calm until it covers your house In crystal blue water so even if you think its calm  RUN FOR YOUR LIFE . This report will remind  you the danger of tsunamis , earthquakes  and violent volcanoes.

violent volcanoes

It slowly rises to the crust as a result of a lot of pressure on the tectonic plates .It is not only this preasure that causes a heriffic eruption.

 

Can you find any features of an explanation text in my writing?