Why is the earth so angry? By George

A volcano is formed by magma building up in layers in the earths crust also if there is to much temptation in the build up then it will be a horrific, ruining exploit and be critical chances of us not surviving this devilsome disaster.

 

Can you find any features of an explanation text in my writing?

Comments
  • Ben says:

    Well done George, I like your use of exciting vocabulary such as: horrific, exploit and devilsome.