Why is the Earth so angry? By Alex

Why is the Earth so angry?

It looks so calm and halmless until it fires out like a bullet covering the town in hot ash and burning lava!A volcano looks just like a mountain although boiling magma is inside.Read on to find out how a volcano is formed.

A volcano is formed with a crack in the tectonic plates.The magma builds up so much pressure as a result of a bigger crack.Then suddenly,the tectonic plates smash into a different position.

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