Why is the earth so angry? By Aaliyah

Why is the earth so angry?

Earthquakes are measured by a mechanic scale. Did you know that? The earthquake that hit tohku region of Japan on March the 11 2011 had  a magnitude of 9.0 and killed over 15005.

Can you find any features of an explanation text in my writing?

Comments
  • Mrs Atherton says:

    I like how you have used a question for your heading Aaliyah, it will make people want to read your writing. Don’t forget to use capital letters for proper nouns.

    Mrs Atherton