Why is earth so angry by Freya

Why is the earth so angry?

This text is all about earthquakes , volcanoes and tornados . All of them are very dangerous but people don’t do anything to cause them. they are called natural disasters.

What happens when a volcano is formed.

A volcano is formed when there is a crack in the earths tectonic plates and the crack gets bigger and pressure starts to form. The pressure  gets so intense and the magma bursts out in an eruption . whilst the magmais still pooring out.

 

Can you find any features of an explanation text in my writing?

Comments
  • Mrs Atherton says:

    I can see lots of features of an explanation text in your writing Freya, especially the technical vocabulary you have included. Don’t forget to use a ? when you are writing a question.

    Mrs Atherton