Natural Disasters , by Olivia

Natural Disasters

The natural disasters that may occur are volcanoes , Earthquakes , Tsunamis and Tornadoes . Volcanoes are a mountain that shoots out hot lava . Earthquakes are were the earth rapidly shakes and causes a distruption  . Tsunamis are a huge wave that is very very  strong . Tornadoes are a large gust of wind that swurls round and  sucks things in .

 

Can you find any features of an explanation text in my writing?

Comments
  • Ben says:

    Well done Olivia, I like your use of punctuation such as: commas and full stops.